It doesn't suck.
I can hear every bobble in the middle, mostly mine. And I'm not projecting enough, possibly because I'm afraid I'm off, possibly because I'm not concentrating enough, possibly because most of this is from the third take, where I was getting tired. But, it doesn't suck.
And the best parts of it really kick ass.
Hopefully, this will go on the CD of Tom Smith covers that will be available at Contata.